I liked the plot.

Needs more gurgle sounds.

"Moans of the Dying" tag?

"paying for college"

After the struggle there weren't nothing left of either of em besides sequins. It spoke of a glamorous horror. God help us all.

I cannot think of the deep sea without shuddering at the nameless things that may at this very moment be crawling and floundering on its slimy bed, worshiping their ancient stone idols and carving their own detestable likenesses on submarine obelisks of water-soaked granite. I dream of a day when they may rise above the billows to drag down in their reeking talons the remnants of puny, war-exhausted mankind�of a day when the land shall sink, and the dark ocean floor shall ascend amidst universal pandemonium.

fake

Did she live?