I must concur with Riskbreaker, though the aspieriffic narration reminds me of a former roommate of mine that talked like this. He lived off of his dad at the age of 25, and all he could talk about was role playing games and Japan.
I dare say i must not of expressed myself clearly, I apologize. His room isn't freakishly messy, he is a freak. Hence a freak that should clean his room, not someone who is a freak because their room is not tidy.
I agree completely. I missed the Goodkind gem because I could swear he called his bed 'band practice' which is quite a stretch even with his amusing accent.
Jesus Christ. I couldn't even get sufficient suspense of disbelief for that crap at age 14, never mind now.
Every time I watch Star Trek's original series I translate it into a cowboy show, I'd be reading that crap and trying to decode it rather than enjoying it.
When I was 13, I would have thought that this guy had the most awesome room ever. I wouldn't even have considered the notion that he was still living with his parents.